Friday, October 8, 2010

Undefined Love ♥

Undefined Love

                        Walking through a dark storage. Detective Gibbs solved every murder case that has accrued when he started working in 1999. 7th Street police station in downtown Maryland. It was the year of 2010. He remembered the story like it happened yesterday.
            Monday morning 8:00am, Gibbs was called to go to Briggs Chaney Middle School, because of a report of homicide. Police cars parked in the front of the school. Gibbs walks in with a long black cloak. He walks into the middle school gym.
“What do we have here boys?” Gibbs said with curiosity
“Rosie Black, 13, died for about three days” said an officer
“Where is the body?” Gibbs said
“Look Up”
The body was hung on top of the gym. Later the police took down the body. The cause of death is that she was beaten to death with a bat. He knew he needed to interview the victim’s friends for evidence and narrow down the suspect.
After looking and examining that body. Gibbs walked to the supply room in the gym. He took a look at the bat section. All but one bat had blood on it. The blood indentified was Rosie Black.
Gibbs interviewed the victim’s boyfriend. Jake McKenzie
“When did you last see Rosie?”
“Last Friday, right after school end, Rosie told me she had to go home early because her parents thinks she’s using drugs” Jake said chuckling
“Do you know anyone that might want to hurt Rosie?”
“Why are you asking me questions about Rosie?” Jake said with concern
“Rosie was murdered”
“What!”Jake blacked out and started crying.
Gibbs took a closer look at the crime scene; it was dark and chilly outside. He heard strange sounds coming from the gym. He quietly pulls out his gun from his black cloak. Sounds of sobbing, and sounds of dragging something heavy. He walked closer and closer to the dark crime scene. The sounds got louder and louder. He finally got to the gym. Gibbs saw someone, in a navy blue jacket, which has the logo of the Briggs Chaney’s Bears. Wearing skinny jeans from Macy’s “Get Back To School” sale. Some all-star converse, it was too dark Gibbs couldn’t recognize the color.
“Stay where you are and put your hands where I can see them” Gibbs said to the stranger
“I’m sorry Rosie, I just wanted you to know how I felt” A girl said with a teary voice.
“I’m detective Gibbs, I’m here to help. Who are you?”
“I…I….I’m Jennifer Shin. I didn’t mean too. I didn’t know what else to do”
Gibb’s took out his phone and called 911
“What did you do?” Gibbs said trying to stall
“It was an accident, I took the bat. I couldn’t stop I was so mad”
Police sirens, doors opening, and sounds of footsteps coming closer. Suddenly the light went on. Police arrested the young girl, and took her to the police station.
Finally Gibbs arrived at the police station. He walked to the interviewing room to interview Jennifer.  He stepped in the room the girl’s hair was a mess. Her mascara made her tears black. She looked depressed.
“Why Jennifer Why?” Gibbs asked wondering
“Rosie and I were best friends, until Jake came along. He ruined everything” Jennifer said with anger in her voice.
“Then what. Killing Rosie would make this better, so you would be with Jake?” Gibbs said
“NO, I had feelings for Rosie. I couldn’t stand seeing her with Jake. I thought if I told her I liked her she would like me back. Friday Night I gave a note telling her to meet me in the gym. I told her I loved her and kissed her. Rosie just told me to stay away from her, so I took the bat and started hitting her.” Jennifer said
“Why did you go back to the crime scene?” Gibbs asked
“I regret killing Rosie; I will so anything to be with her” Jennifer said
Jennifer was sent to prison in Florida. After a month there, she hung herself. Now she can be with Rosie forever.

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- Kristine ♥ Nguyen

2 comments:

  1. this is a sad story, isn't it. I love the part: “NO, I had feelings for Rosie. I couldn’t stand seeing her with Jake. I thought if I told her I liked her she would like me back. Friday Night I gave a note telling her to meet me in the gym. I told her I loved her and kissed her. Rosie just told me to stay away from her, so I took the bat and started hitting her.” Jennifer said"- so romantic right:P

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  2. WOAH, awesome story :]
    i like horror-ish/romantic-ish stories, theyre so full of life! :D

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